...do you...

By dumbone

 
…So you face nothingness…
…Yet…
You believe that you are in love
In all the riches this world has to offer
But nothing
Except love for those things.
Is what you have,
What you’ll always have.
You’ll die!
For beliefs
That other bestowed in your heart and mind,
But you’ll not fight for yourself.
…So you face nothingness…     
…Yet…
.
.
.
You live

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Copyright 2013 dumbone
Published on Thursday, June 6, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • xZombie Poptartzx On Thursday, June 6, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (332)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this thoroughly.. filled with passion in such a short write. xoxo

  • dumbone On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, dumbone (62)By person wrote:

    the thing is... i like to write short and criptic mostly general stuff... thank you for reading

  • Devilish On Thursday, June 6, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Aweeeeeeeee you have such a passionate soul.. this is beautiful. Scholar

  • dumbone On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, dumbone (62)By person wrote:

    thank you dark soul of mine... for reading and commenting...

  • dwells On Thursday, June 6, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Dum - wondering if Jet (somebody's name maybe) or Yet (still)? We all go through those phases and they say if you aren't liberal by the time you are 25, then you have no heart. If you still are liberal by the time you are 45, then you have no brain! Always enjoy quoting that truism, cheers!

  • dumbone On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, dumbone (62)By person wrote:

    always wise words my friend... thank you for reading

  • A former member wrote: Short and well written. I enjoyed this.

  • dumbone On Thursday, June 6, 2013, dumbone (62)By person wrote:

    thank you... for reading and commenting...

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