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Destruction
By brokensme
This battle is over
The war is closing in on us
Run from it
Save yourself
Because I no longer matter
I can see you are tired
So am I
I will push on
So that you can survive
Because I no longer matter
Be at piece
You can have your vacate
Enjoy your time away from the front lines
I have this covered
Because I no longer matter
Nothing else can hurt me
My soul is cold
My heart stone
Bullets fear me
Because I no longer matter
To the enemies of tomorrow
You fear me
I will destroy you
You stand no chance
Because I have nothing left to loose
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Copyright 2013 brokensme
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On Monday, May 27, 2013, dwells
(4284)
wrote:
peace and vacation for piece and vacate - hmm...wondering if intentional? Definitely a duality if intended or not. The setup for this was very well done but the final closing a bit weak which is pretty much normal when mixed emotions always leave an escape route, thanks BM.
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On Monday, May 27, 2013, brokensme
(20) wrote:
It was intentional and yes the ending is weak just like people tend to fade out
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On Monday, May 27, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
This is good, other than a few misspellings, but I won't nit pick. I think it's quite bold. Well done!
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