comfort food

By King_Crazy_Dave

flexed to cook up
hook up healthy verse,
my dishes
dish not, normal physics
or is it?
Internal rhyme is give and
taken thyme and bacon
wakened senses
intense in me the recipe-
its simple, its fresh
all fleetfoot and mesh
more garnish than flesh


pad of butter words
skittering cross the canvas pan
less chef than poet
more poet than man.

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Copyright 2013 King_Crazy_Dave
Published on Saturday, May 18, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

dinner time
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  • flawofthepoet On Wednesday, October 2, 2019, flawofthepoet (53)By person wrote:

    There is amazing flow to this poem.

  • A former member wrote: You had be at bacon

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 5, 2014, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    A delicious piece, a poetic delicacy for the nomming.

  • megaprime81 On Sunday, January 5, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    Wow! I love how this twists and turns. This is poetry at its finest. Impressive, KCD. Much deserving of the 10.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Sunday, January 5, 2014, Dreaming in Stanzas (303)By person wrote:

    This is a whole new level of amazingness. And the last 4 lines were absolute perfection. I should write poems in the kitchen more often and hope they turn out like this...

  • dwells On Sunday, May 19, 2013, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    The way to a man's heart is through his gullet, for sure, bon apaetit!

  • A former member wrote: everything is better with bacon...and you.

  • elisa On Saturday, May 18, 2013, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    and that's how you baste an ass. yes indeedy

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, May 18, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...spicy. al dente at the end...

  • A former member wrote: So snarky, so sarcastic and this tiny little pearl of a confession. Nicely done, as always.

  • Devilish On Saturday, May 18, 2013, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    I'm with astra.. fuck yeah!! and he's back.. Scholar

  • Star On Saturday, May 18, 2013, Star (920)By person wrote:

    i'm hungry now, good eatings

  • Dei On Saturday, May 18, 2013, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    fuck yeah. make that a dinner for two. You had me at internal rhyme and thyme but by butter i had melted.

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