The sounds she makes

By Deathkitten

The sounds she makes
once she wakes

Cute & slightly pitiful

Yawning, whining & grunting
She stretches her arms the width of her bed
stiffening, spreading & stretching her legs

Unaware of the fact i'm in her presence
Uncovers & wads up the blankets
Turning her head side to side
then rotating almost as a bobble head

Right then, she spots me

I release a sigh
then smile at her
My tongue won't flap
My voice won't speak
These lips are sealed
Thoughts have peaked

I open my arms
letting her in
I love her more
when my teeth sink in

Sounds...

The gasps & moans
that fill the room
and enter my being
and dance through my soul

The sounds she makes
They make me whole

This is love
or so i'm told

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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Monday, April 29, 2013.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • haunted On Thursday, May 2, 2013, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    this is very beautiful. I just wish lesbians would let men in the bedroom with them because I don't think women realize how sexy and sensual love can be between two women. you captured this moment very well. and it is very romantic. awesome!

  • Deathkitten On Thursday, May 2, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Oh I know how sensual it looks haha I am long gone from the days i've let others join in. I've become a greedy bitch with the display of my sexual deeds. No one gets to watch. Not even another female. Don't feel bad ahah thanks, Todd :)

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, April 30, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...sexy & tender, it's a pleasant scene to peek in on...

  • Deathkitten On Tuesday, April 30, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Indeed! Thanks, Faded.

  • Alchemist On Monday, April 29, 2013, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    I'm not sure if I should have a warm fuzzy feeling inside for a furry friend or a hot sweaty feeling for a sexy seductress stretching out on my bed, lol, I guess both are good to come home to at night. One will just put you to sleep faster, maybe?

  • Deathkitten On Monday, April 29, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Hard to tell sometimes, isn't it? Haha the brain is such a curious thing.

  • dwells On Monday, April 29, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Very feline indeed, but never roll your head as any chiropracter will tell you. This visual image was a memorable one and softly sensual, thanks.

  • Deathkitten On Monday, April 29, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Hence my username, right? Thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it.

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