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Swallow
By Deathkitten
Lunar eclipse
Shadow my scars
Dirt buried deep
Solid black bars
Finger me out
Scoop away rage
Passion perceptible
A shake of red leaf
A darkness I crave
Irrevocable words
Irreversible thoughts
Irreparable things
Mindless actions
Fears unknown
Scabs are pulled
Fault built home
Walking contradictions
Zombies of trust
Untimely manner
Full of lust
Crimson tides
Unmentionable souls
Sex appeal
Swallow whole
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Thursday, January 17, 2013.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Swallow"
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A former member wrote:
Well now, this is also intriguing interesting. I love lines, "walking contradictions" and , "zombies of trust" the depth of the abstraction is hauntingly beautiful. Well done poet.
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A former member wrote:
This had the effect of a picture slide, each new image stirring up something different with every line.
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A former member wrote:
this flows quite nicely... I find it has a very open meaning as well making it easy to relate to... fine work.
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On Monday, January 21, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700)
wrote:
awesome imagery I love the one or two words put together to form such flow.
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On Thursday, January 17, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thank you all for reading & all the kind words :)
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On Thursday, January 17, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
I love the style you have written this in. Minimal words that portray a lot . I fitted it to a situation that I was in with someone a while back and it sat perfectly for me! I love it when I find poems that do that! In that situation I jumped in feet first and was scarily absorbed totally by the wash of emotions. Poems are great when they connect because you get that reassurance that others understand.
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A former member wrote:
Good job, it gives the reader a lot to think about and has a cool effect.
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On Thursday, January 17, 2013, deathndismay
(93) wrote:
I really like this piece.. Thought provoking through and through... 10/10
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