Demons In My Head

By Killerdemonchick

The faintest whisper
Into the loudest roar.
I want to ignore them but they scream even more.
We want the pain
Welcome to blood galore!
I try to hold onto reality
But I just slip.
Do you hear the blood?
It goes drip, drip.
It is your blood you hear
I can see your tears
Hear your cries
They know your fears
Demons hide behind my eyes
Whispers, what to do for years
So be prepared for me to snap
Because this time I won't be coming back

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Published on Thursday, November 1, 2012. Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Demons In My Head"

On Friday, August 16, 2019, sadistic intent hex (206) wrote:

The demons hide behind the eyes. Eyes are the keyholes to the soul.
A former member wrote: Stupendous ending, I love your horror poems, and everyone has their own demons, some are darker than others
A former member wrote: Aha, something I can relate to, a bit too much perhaps. Excellent write, and with such a climactic, threatening end, almost gave me shivers ;)
On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, SinneR (17) wrote:

Gran finale - you could not have ended it better. Good job
A former member wrote: "Demons hide behind my eyes" I love this line, so powerful, intriguing, and eyes can be so alluring...
A former member wrote: "... I can see your tears Hear your cries They know your fears Demons hide behind my eyes..." I guess we all truly have our own demons huh? lol Loved the imagery in this piece, truly amazing.
A former member wrote: I do quite like your horror posts here, love the imagery, great read m'love ~rose
A former member wrote: Very nice, love the imagery.
On Friday, November 2, 2012, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Mmmm I love a sinister post.. demons. i love them too.. hello there you..
A former member wrote: Amazing. I really enjoy reading your work. Keep up the good work and welcome to DP. If ya ned anything, shoot me a message.
On Thursday, November 1, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

AHhh, just keep writing here on DP and titillating us all, you definitely belong, cheers and welcome!