Demons In My Head

By Killerdemonchick

The faintest whisper
Into the loudest roar.
I want to ignore them but they scream even more.
We want the pain
Welcome to blood galore!
I try to hold onto reality
But I just slip.
Do you hear the blood?
It goes drip, drip.
It is your blood you hear
I can see your tears
Hear your cries
They know your fears
Demons hide behind my eyes
Whispers, what to do for years
So be prepared for me to snap
Because this time I won't be coming back

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Copyright 2012 Killerdemonchick
Published on Thursday, November 1, 2012.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • 13sonsofgod On Friday, August 16, 2019, 13sonsofgod (939)By person wrote:

    Eyes , windows to the soul indeed Windows and doorways to the spiritual Windows with shutters that can be shut once learned The all seeing eye.... Learn to close your shutters For we are watching you..... Great write, well done...13....

  • sadistic intent hex On Friday, August 16, 2019, sadistic intent hex (223)By person wrote:

    The demons hide behind the eyes. Eyes are the keyholes to the soul.

  • A former member wrote: Stupendous ending, I love your horror poems, and everyone has their own demons, some are darker than others

  • A former member wrote: Aha, something I can relate to, a bit too much perhaps. Excellent write, and with such a climactic, threatening end, almost gave me shivers ;)

  • SinneR On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, SinneR (25)By person wrote:

    Gran finale - you could not have ended it better. Good job

  • Meggerz On Tuesday, November 27, 2012, Meggerz (88)By person wrote:

    "... I can see your tears Hear your cries They know your fears Demons hide behind my eyes..." I guess we all truly have our own demons huh? lol Loved the imagery in this piece, truly amazing.

  • Winter Rose On Tuesday, November 27, 2012, Winter Rose (57)By person wrote:

    I do quite like your horror posts here, love the imagery, great read m'love ~rose

  • A former member wrote: Very nice, love the imagery.

  • Devilish On Friday, November 2, 2012, Devilish (3765)By person wrote:

    Mmmm I love a sinister post.. demons. i love them too.. hello there you.. Scholar

  • insanity On Friday, November 2, 2012, insanity (15)By person wrote:

    Amazing. I really enjoy reading your work. Keep up the good work and welcome to DP. If ya ned anything, shoot me a message.

  • dwells On Thursday, November 1, 2012, dwells (5701)By person wrote:

    AHhh, just keep writing here on DP and titillating us all, you definitely belong, cheers and welcome!

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