Alley Cat Habits

By Maladroit

These
alley cat habits
that
override my sensiblity
will
be my death.

Dress me fancy,
for
I have died
doing
everything dreamers dreamed
and
what stale lovers
lost.

Though,
I always hoped
upon
something more noteworthy.
-Headlined-
"local girl dies
while
feeding lions lies
and
extracting the burdens
from
the aimless ants."








..... but, is that
      not
      what I have done?
      If not for
      others,
      but for myself?
     



Graves
can be warm
when
fools justify foolishness.

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Copyright 2012 Maladroit
Published on Saturday, October 20, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

..not that my mother would agree..
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  • A former member wrote: That last line is epic ;)

  • Ashteroth On Thursday, April 4, 2013, Ashteroth (190)By person wrote:

    You strike me as an interesting person :) I relate to the feeding lions and removing burdens of ants, the two extremes are something that frequent my life a lot and it emphasizes how many things are worth doing. ~Ash

  • Dreamscape On Wednesday, December 12, 2012, Dreamscape (22)By person wrote:

    I like your poem, it has some very effective lines in it. Also, I don’t know if u care, but I have accidentally noticed that the word “sensiblity” is missing one of its bones.

  • Devilish On Monday, December 10, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Damn your fucking good!! My god i visualize doing things to you. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: heh. I am liking this piece. The substance is great, a nice flow was felt through out. Good one : ) Scholar

  • A former member wrote: So much can be taken from this... Graves can be warm when fools justify foolishness. Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, October 21, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...& how do we control that jester, that fool that lives in all of us, & often overrides our common sense?...

  • Strataic On Tuesday, October 23, 2012, Strataic (99)By person wrote:

    Amen... to that Mr. Blue Scholar

  • Devilish On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    The things I would do to you if ever the chance.my god i wanna suck on your thinking stick and swallow the rest of you.. damn girl.. when you post you make your presence felt.. ill take it with me for later .. i love your poetry. Scholar

  • Alchemist On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    The first and last stanzas are beautiful and deep.


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