Cheap Cigarettes and Vodka Will Always Remind Me of You.

By Quietus

 







Two girls,

Beautiful and all grown up.

They’ve known each other

For years.

The best years of their lives

Have come by and gone.

Who knew it’d go so fast?

 

They used to sneak out

At the crack of midnight,

To see cute, older boys

And smoke cheap cigarettes.

They used to crack open the vodka

When no parents were home,

Just to forget the world together.

 

Who will forget the world with them now?
Three-thousand miles apart sounded easy,

But it’s not so easy,

Is it?

No, it isn’t easy when neither girl

Wants to be replaced.

A short phone call cannot be compared to seven years of bliss.









 

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Copyright 2012 Quietus
Published on Sunday, October 14, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Can't even enjoy a smoke without crying.
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  • A former member wrote: Distance will never break the strongest souls. Very emotional poem.

  • FadedBlues On Monday, October 15, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...phone calls & e-mail aren't as good as being side-by-side, but they help. the best is yet to come...

  • Dei On Sunday, October 14, 2012, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    awe! i had a best girl friend and we smoked Kools and drank Vodka and hated the world together. This was a sweet reminder. thanks

  • Quietus On Sunday, October 14, 2012, Quietus (75)By person wrote:

    Sounds a lot like my bestfriend and I. We always dared each other to grab the butts of cute guys at concerts, as well! Hahaha.

  • Devilish On Sunday, October 14, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I just got chills all over my body. no baby a phone call is the furthest thing from ok. it is the first thing that makes it the last thing You feel me" thank you baby for reading me your comment made my day.. Scholar

  • Quietus On Sunday, October 14, 2012, Quietus (75)By person wrote:

    Thanks c: I know my friend and I will be friends forever, it just gets tough and lonely sometimes.

  • dwells On Sunday, October 14, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Nice to see you posting again, stay in touch for life is long, cheers!

  • Quietus On Sunday, October 14, 2012, Quietus (75)By person wrote:

    Feels good to be posting again, thanks c:

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