"Darling, you can't live like this."
By Blood Saga
And she says: "Call me in the morning.
Tell me that you're still
alive."
I give her a smile like breaking glass,
and a noncommittal sigh.
She says: "Darling,
you
can't live like this."
But in the end she fades away,
like all the others before her.
Nothing here to see
today;
she takes the sunlight with her.
Take a train
into Manhattan;
fire-birds circling the dawn.
This guy
playing a sad song;
pretty soon I'll be gone.
A little
closer to a revelation;
on the interstate the exit's too bright
to miss.
Smiling when I see the oncoming headlights;
she'd said: "Darling, you can't live like this."
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Copyright 2012 Blood Saga
Author's Note:
I honestly don't know what this is or where it came from. I kind of blame the Mountain Goats.Awards
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On Tuesday, November 14, 2017, Cassette
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I adore this.
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On Tuesday, November 14, 2017, Candy Cain
(49) wrote:
yeah, the mountain goats kinda do that to ye. great lyrics.
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A former member wrote:
in the end she fades away... i like the ambiguity of the line, did she actively or passively fade? where lies the fault? is fault even involved? this made me think, thank you for the read :)
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On Thursday, July 17, 2014, Star
(879) wrote:
I literally feel like crying. beautiful.
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On Saturday, August 17, 2013, Clydes_Bonnie
(53) wrote:
This hits home. Thank you for the write
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A former member wrote:
Deep...meaningful. I like it
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A former member wrote:
I too, had read this in a sing-song voice, albeit it is not a bad thing. Loved the flow, the picturesque description and articulation. Brilliant piece of work.
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On Sunday, October 7, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...quick little scenes that lead to an explosive conclusion...