Unalloyed
By Maladroit
If you were a color,
you would be any shade in neon-
feeding
eccentric thoughts to brighter heights.
Enlightenment embodied.
Sometimes,
I sneak into your bed.
You always wake
up long enough to erupt into laughing hysterics,
and then you collapse
back into dreaming
placing your head upon my chest.
I lay
smiling,
staring up at star light projections-
whispering
secrets,
hoping my love finds you subliminally
and maybe
I am weaving myself into your brainwaves
wiring myself as the
hero in your dreams.
I always stay a while,
because
now and then
you throw your hand back to my face
pawing for
Braille
reading me
for a,
"I am still here."
On these nights,
I always turn the air down, to low-
controlling things that will make you need me
and I blanket my
fingers
in the curls of your hair-
twirling thoughts
about how there is no accurate measure
nor an adequate anything
though,
it can all fit into my hands-
but I love
in measurements,
Unmeasurable..
and
all the tangibles
could vary,
but I love you more than what arms can carry...
Comments on "Unalloyed"
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On Saturday, September 1, 2012, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
This read chaotically calm. Loved the thought of subliminally feeding emotions as a method to express the depth of the not quite expressables. Well played :)
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A former member wrote:
I love 'pawing for braille'....made me tear up. I love it all. I've tried so many times to write something for aspen, but i can't find the words...maybe if i could invent new words, or if i spoke in violin....this is beyond beautiful and i love it.
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On Monday, August 20, 2012, Dominic
(53) wrote:
Wow! A superbly crafted piece. Love it.
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A former member wrote:
WOW this just makes me want to cry not for it being sad but it being amazing..Your son must be proud of his mom...;)
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On Sunday, August 19, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...this overflows with the strongest love...
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On Sunday, August 19, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
I can't find the words.......unbelievable......obsessed with your words.
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On Sunday, August 19, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
There is not one single fucking word I can type to grasp where my mind is at.. This just got you faved and I swear it's you i'm fucking tonight. As you lay me down to sleep Your words exhale the soul I keep.. Damnnnnnnnnnnn girll.....
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On Sunday, August 19, 2012, Maladroit
(198) wrote:
You always tell me the most romantic things ;) my favorite sweetheart..