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(In)-(Re)-flection
By veingo
There are things to be said in a stern voice.
"Back off"
"I said NO"
"This is your last warning"
There are things to be said in jest.
"How would YOU know?"
"So's your mom"
"That's what she said"
Some things should be said with a submissive honor.
"I apologize"
"I didn't mean it"
"I love you"
Others, should infer compassion.
"Don't cry honey"
"It'll be ok"
"I won't leave you"
And then there's poetry.
So what you think
will be a link
to all, through out the ages.
Can't bear to speak?
Than scream in ink,
and bleed upon the pages.
...
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Copyright 2012 veingo
Published on Friday, July 13, 2012.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
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Author's Note:
Kerry. :)-Comments on "(In)-(Re)-flection"
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On Sunday, July 15, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293)
wrote:
Those last three lines seriously gave me chills. You are such a poet and this just proves it even more. It's like you exactly what to say and that's a gift that not many have. Love it.
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A former member wrote:
loved this..great exploration of dialogue and then the beauty of the last stanza..perfect.
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On Friday, July 13, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx
(332) wrote:
I really like how you ended this one. The way it was written out is unique and i definitely enjoyed it :)
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On Friday, July 13, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Stupendous job and the finale was so insightful and coherent beyond words, cheers!
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On Friday, July 13, 2012, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
Dont cry honey ... it will be okay ... I wont leave you ....made me have a little tears maybe this is like s test for some, I think for me its difficult sometimes to decipher a pretty poem .. I pick out the words that touch me and feel others feelings .. make me say Awww and some make me close my eyes ..and think .. I'm happy you know this feeling to .. blessings. ~*
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