impassioned.

By jodeanna

 Waves of passion
flow from you
like liquid.

A glimpse in your eyes
says more than you ever could
with your tongue.

I can see the pulsing flames
that dance heatedly within you.
They threaten to devour you.
I think that, perhaps,
they would devour me too
if you'd let them.

I could easily
become addicted
to this.

And so
I stay
away.

For 
fear.



But then again,
I couldn't stand to lose this.

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Copyright 2012 Jodeanna Marie
Published on Wednesday, February 8, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This isn't just about lust. It's so much more than that.
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  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, February 14, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...wonderful truth in the 2nd stanza: eyes speak that which can't be conveyed in language...

  • redfurrydragon On Saturday, February 11, 2012, redfurrydragon (50)By person wrote:

    A light of familiarity...dark love...thank you for the warm breeze in the cold of night...

  • Devilish On Monday, February 6, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I think that, perhaps, they would devour me too if you'd let them. I like how you said that instead of if I let them.. Says a lot.. lovely.. Thank you for the comment on my work miss... I appreciate it.. Scholar

  • dwells On Monday, February 6, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    You will always wonder unless you do - most people don't think too much about poetry and the stock answer usually is "that's nice". So don't get your hopes up either, cheers!

  • jodeanna On Wednesday, February 8, 2012, jodeanna (41)By person wrote:

    You're right. I would have always wondered "What if?" I showed it to him and he was very flattered.

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