Leaving

By darkness falls

I'm falling again through dark skies of pain
Where the stars shine cold and cruel
Alone and uncaring, abandoned by hope
Branded an outcast fool

I thought it was done, thought I'd gotten away
Broke free of the ties that bound me
But I look around, there's no one there
As far as my eyes can see

I've tried to find a way to break out
But I'm lost in the grip of this madness
And farther I fall, down and down
Toward the depths of eternal sadness

I wish I could share but one last touch
A laugh, a sigh, the love in her eyes
But these walls unshakeable and unbreakable
Echo back the sound of my cries

The taste of happiness now long since gone
Memories of another place
Where I was loved for a short time
The sun was warm on my face

Somehow for me its got to end
I pray for my time to come
The hope I had has faded away
And lifes light has gone down with the sun

Tell them I loved them....

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Copyright 2011 darkness falls
Published on Sunday, December 18, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: That last line was beautiful tragic and haunting. This is a great poem. I know life gets hard, but there's always something worth living for. I hope you find peace and happiness! Really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

  • ColorMeToxic On Sunday, December 18, 2011, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    I hope this does not seriously reflect your current mental state...we all feel like giving up sometimes...but those of us who choose to keep on living, no matter how shitty life is, have the real strength...good write...can feel hopelessness...sadly... Scholar

  • Phantasmagoria On Sunday, December 18, 2011, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    Such gloominess. A very serious topic, leaving this world we call home. It seems as if the light never shines upon those who are down in the dark. But something I realized not too long ago, is that living in the dark is what makes me somewhat happy, just think about that. Anyways nice poem!

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