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Jupiter Pools
By Ladyhawke
Frozen
Bewildered
Lording over the sea
Collapsing from the
planets
Surrounding and supporting me
I'm charmed
Embraced
Captivated by jewels
Your arms, an oasis
Eyes,
like violet jupiter pools
Await
Enchant
Skip
rocks underwater
Entangle in your webb
The universe only daughter
Voilent
At peace
Dare promise me the stars
Carry
it through the wind
As the waters edge causes scars
Silence
Savage
As our dreams are our grave
Surround me
with beauty
Surely, there are those we can save
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Copyright 2011 Ladyhawke
Published on Tuesday, December 13, 2011.
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful poem.
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A former member wrote:
:skip rocks underwater: such a striking turn of phrase, thank you for these lines... the hopefulness of dreams, the inevitability of failure and the need to always try (hopeless optimism that so wracks a poet).
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A former member wrote:
Great piece of work-deep, meaningful and deeper yet. I love planets and this just made me happy...excellent.
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On Monday, February 6, 2012, sTr8-jAcKeT
(735)
wrote:
Wow, deep, moving, passionate & beautiful. This captures a lot to the reader (atleast to me) and I appreciate this piece. This is very beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
The imagery is epic! It gives me hope that there are those that can paint with words, and that the statement can be said truthfully and not ironically. I love the nautical themes and blend of contradictions to illustrate the complication of the feelings. 11 and a half stars, but not 12. Cause why, i said so.
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A former member wrote:
Woe...Broad and Fascinating!
Truly Expressive and Brilliant in form!
Intriguing
Thanks
This is for keeps
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On Saturday, December 17, 2011, Meadowhawk
(163) wrote:
Beautifully written, Milady! Sweet imagery and a nice flow. Well versed.
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A former member wrote:
Dreamy. Like flying through the solar system.
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A former member wrote:
Fucking epic!
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On Tuesday, December 13, 2011, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Excellent, and thanks for this lovely glimpse into a hopeful universe of something better.
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On Tuesday, December 13, 2011, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
One of the most whimsical and well written poems I've read on this site. Simply beautiful.
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