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Defeat
By GreekPhilosopher
To find where I keep my soul
Go and find the deepest hole
Deep down in the ground
Where there is not a sound
It is way up high
Up in the blue sky
Look under the sea
And it is there to see
If you ever dare
Go to these places and stare
Try to find them and you will see
That there is nothing left for me
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Copyright 2003 GreekPhilosopher
Published on Wednesday, July 9, 2003.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Defeat"
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On Thursday, June 8, 2006, Lythodaemil
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wrote:
I agree with this peom so much.
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On Monday, June 7, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
love it! this is simply great art! *669*
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A former member wrote:
cool, lonely and diffrent, i need a hole too, haha. good keep it up.
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
ah, a place where you might find me as well...this flowed nicely, i like
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A former member wrote:
nice. the middle stanza was great "look under the sea" is such a cool image.
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