My Dear Whore

By TheCreepIngCrow

 My dear whore
Smile sweetly
Leave him 'fore
He kills you neatly
Stop opening 
Your easy knees
And run as far
As you may please
A great love
You once had
Your misfortune
Has turned it bad
Keep your smile
Spread as need
Have a child
Who you can feed
My dear whore
Keep your heart
You've been beautiful
From the start.

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Copyright 2011 TheCreepIngCrow
Published on Thursday, November 24, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TheCreepIngCrow On Friday, November 25, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow (35)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the comments!

  • dwells On Friday, November 25, 2011, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    A very touching "I told you so" and well depicted in verse, thanks.

  • Poe Etiquette On Friday, November 25, 2011, Poe Etiquette (124)By person wrote:

    good good. good scheme and rhymes. solid message

  • rosemaiden On Thursday, November 24, 2011, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    really good poem ...very sweet

  • Devilish On Thursday, November 24, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Awe this is awsome... I love your work as I have said... Scholar

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