My Dear Whore

By TheCreepIngCrow

My dear whore
Smile sweetly
Leave him 'fore
He kills you neatly
Stop opening
Your easy knees
And run as far
As you may please
A great love
You once had
Your misfortune
Has turned it bad
Keep your smile
Spread as need
Have a child
Who you can feed
My dear whore
Keep your heart
You've been beautiful
From the start.

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Published on Thursday, November 24, 2011. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "My Dear Whore"

On Friday, November 25, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow (35) wrote:

Thanks for the comments!
On Friday, November 25, 2011, dwells (4177) wrote:

A very touching "I told you so" and well depicted in verse, thanks.
On Friday, November 25, 2011, Poe Etiquette (124) wrote:

good good. good scheme and rhymes. solid message
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, rosemaiden (180) wrote:

really good poem ...very sweet
On Thursday, November 24, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Awe this is awsome... I love your work as I have said...