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A Scented Hate
By TheCreepIngCrow
I smell the Demon's sweet stench.
It"s a luring scent.
Pounding
at my
Soul, to open its doors.
Leaving pockets of evil in forms
of
Sores.
He grasps my mind firmly in his
Hands,
Forcing
my love to
Disband.
He controls the essence of what I do.
Things unspoken of.
He wants me to kill you.
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Copyright 2011 TheCreepIngCrow
Published on Wednesday, November 23, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow
(35)
wrote:
Thank-you for reading!
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
ooo very evil and interesting i like it...thanks
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On Wednesday, November 23, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow
(35) wrote:
Thank you for the critique. I've been trying to improve my poems for awhile. Your criticism is highly appreciated.
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On Wednesday, November 23, 2011, With love_Crow
(83) wrote:
Short but still quite intriguing. You could have done more with the idea but it's a good start. Welcome to DP. I hope you continually grow from here.
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