A Scented Hate

By TheCreepIngCrow

I smell the Demon's sweet stench.
It"s a luring scent.
Pounding at my
Soul, to open its doors.
Leaving pockets of evil in forms of
Sores.
He grasps my mind firmly in his
Hands,
Forcing my love to 
Disband.
He controls the essence of what I do.
Things unspoken of.
He wants me to kill you.

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Copyright 2011 TheCreepIngCrow
Published on Wednesday, November 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TheCreepIngCrow On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow (35)By person wrote:

    Thank-you for reading!

  • rosemaiden On Thursday, November 24, 2011, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    ooo very evil and interesting i like it...thanks

  • TheCreepIngCrow On Wednesday, November 23, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow (35)By person wrote:

    Thank you for the critique. I've been trying to improve my poems for awhile. Your criticism is highly appreciated.

  • With love_Crow On Wednesday, November 23, 2011, With love_Crow (82)By person wrote:

    Short but still quite intriguing. You could have done more with the idea but it's a good start. Welcome to DP. I hope you continually grow from here.

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