My Dark Angel

By TheCreepIngCrow

 Oh, My dark Angel. Strum those strong, those long.Black wings. Detstroy the blanket of evil surrounding me.Paint my hearts pickets.Black. Captivate the hidden, the crawling. The feathers die one by one,although the fight has only just begun. Cure my split thoughts,With the saliva on your tongue. Hold me with your warm wings,Steal my gasping breaths as I am crying. Love me as I am dying,Your black eyes tempt my prying. Let me ride your heartfelt soul,As together we soar, flying. Watch the lights over the city,Know below is not but one tested pity. Protect me with your perky ears.Steer me toward the shadows, cure my illness, cure my fears. Oh Dark Angel.I don't regret your darkened look. Cause in my darkest light,you, and only you, had stood. In the light you cured my fright. In the dark you guided my sight. In the blizzard you held me tight. In the graveyard we soaked up moonlight. Oh, Dark Angel.I need you so. If your comforting wings were gone,My heart wouldnt know where to go. Your wings beat to and froDirty feet show your workLike tracks in the snow. I am afraid, without you here.You grasp my ticking,and Hit my sneer. oh, my dark Angel.Without you my world is done. You frighten the bullets,to retrieve back to the gun. And even with,your long black wings. Beating loudly,I still hear your voice sing. Such heavenly bells,Light enough to annihalate Hell. Oh, Dark Angel.You protect my soul. Wihtout your direction,I don't know where I'd go. Your words wise as Poe.Live inside me.Just so I know. 

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Copyright 2012 TheCreepIngCrow
Published on Saturday, February 18, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TheCreepIngCrow On Saturday, February 25, 2012, TheCreepIngCrow (35)By person wrote:

    thanks for the criticism

  • Magdalena On Sunday, February 19, 2012, Magdalena (614)By person wrote:

    A great write, I agree with dwells. I read much dark fantasy, your piece brings this to mind.

  • Iz2cold On Saturday, February 18, 2012, Iz2cold (4)By person wrote:

    I love this piece well put together captivated me from start to finish

  • dwells On Saturday, February 18, 2012, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Hi CC, you spent a lot of time on this piece and it shows, but if you ever wish to "edit" and re-format into lines and stanzas, it would be much more reader friendly. THanks and cheers!

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