To Mr. E A Poe
By Poe Etiquette
Thou hast drawn, fondly, sir
Into every mind and heart
A tragic melodrama sure
To endear them to thy art
Thy words have woken loves and fear
Unbeknownst 'till then
Unparallelled throughout the years
By any other noble pen
Untimely the deaths of all thy peers
Have cert'ly lent to thy words and deeds
Awoken, nightly, by thy tears
Bleeding onto paper as early seeds
Growing then to dark-lit tales
Foretelling some impending doom
Imagination which never fails
To excite the mossy mind of gloom
Thy weeping willow shoulders
Hunched nobly o'er thy desk
Thoughts hindered by pebbles and boulders
Of each of life's dis-heart'ning tests
Ballads, sonnets, and refrains
Stories, poems, and song
Thou hath writ and given names
Burnt onto every poet's tongue
Surely, now, in sacred death
And past thy walls of haunted flesh
Thou feel'st some mighty angel's breath
And sail on golden seas afresh
In a glorious, bright, and wond'rous heav'n
Contrasting, sharp, thy days on earth
Now dwell you in fair Allysium'
Risen to new and happy birth
And, though your pen writes nevermore
Nor traverses palest pages
Your legacy shall still endure
Beyond the ending ages
Awards
Comments on "To Mr. E A Poe"
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On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
Ol' Edgar's style makes everything a fun read and this was a very artful and thoughtful work.
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On Sunday, October 28, 2012, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
so glad you enjoyed it. thanks for taking the time
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On Sunday, April 1, 2012, ericvonnoir
(4) wrote:
i like the way it ended it was a good read
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A former member wrote:
Incredible EA Poe and HP Lovecraft are without a doubt the two best short story writers of all time in my opinion.
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On Friday, November 25, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow
(35) wrote:
A ten for sure. I love Poe, and you did him justice. I'm completely and utterly enchanted by this.
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2012, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
oh youre far too kind. thank you for taking the time
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A former member wrote:
Brilliant :) I'm a huge Poe fan myself and love this style of poetry.
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2012, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
if you like poe, id suggest looking into byron. he was poe's favorite
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On Friday, July 8, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I totally agree with Triton. This toally captures the aura, if you would, of poe. The writing was brilliant. I love this. Best write iv read in a long while. The crafting is amazing. Im sorry, what i say just cannot bring justice to how great i feel this write is. Wonderful job. 10 for me;)
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On Monday, July 11, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
thank you very much Ladyhawk. that is very refreshing and relieving to hear
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A former member wrote:
Wow, I love Edgar Allen Poe, he is one of my favorite writers, and, to me, this poem captures his magnificence well.
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On Saturday, February 12, 2011, maliceman
(32) wrote:
i love this. i was actually named after E.A.P. luckily my mother spared me the names of Edgar and Poe lol
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On Saturday, February 12, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
haha i like the name Alan. (or Allan) it is also the name of a character i would love to play in Equus (a play by Peter Shaefer)
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A former member wrote:
Edgar Allan Poe would be proud. I admire how you put bits of his own work into this like "nevermore" it adds such an intense affect. Beautifully written, I can tell you cared about this an awful lot. As a fan of Poe I tell you sir well done! =)
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
thank you so much for your encouragement. and, yes. i am an avid poe faine. nice to meet another :)
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On Thursday, January 20, 2011, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
A beautiful tribute to a superb writer. Nicely done!
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On Thursday, January 20, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
much appreciated. thank you
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, HeadpatSlut
(257) wrote:
A flawless tribute to one of the greatest poets of the entire Romanticist genre, thanks for the nice read.
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
thanks for taking the time to read it. glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the compliment
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
beautifully writtten....wonderful tribute. *bows*
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
thanks so much!!
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On Sunday, January 9, 2011, Iwas
(39) wrote:
You are amazingly brilliant. Poe himself wasn't truly appreciated until after his time. I will keep an eye on you friend.
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On Monday, January 10, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
thank you so very much. thats such a huge encouragement!
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A former member wrote:
Enjoyed the work regardless of the "thous" and "yous". Wonderful write, has an old-world feel to it... quite pleasing. :)
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On Saturday, January 8, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
thank you for the tip :) although i personall yi believe sometimes it is a necesary evil. ie "now dwell you in fair Allysium" it would sound weird to say thou. but in general i agree with you and thanks for reading
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On Sunday, January 9, 2011, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...there's always "thee" as well...don't forget that...and in the plural, "you" should still work...sorry to intrude on your write...but if someone tells you what not to do, but doesn't give you an actual solution...then what did they even accomplish...? yeah, nothing...
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On Monday, January 10, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
thanks. i will adhere my concentration more avidly to my fallacies in this area henceforth. thanks for hte solution and for reading
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A former member wrote:
If you're going to use "thou" and "thy", do not also use "you" and "your".