Mental DVD

By Antigeist

My Commentary Feature Has Been Damaged

My Bright Shiney Reflective Surface Is Scratched

My Title Menu Has Frozen

My Copyright Agreement Has Been Broken

Theres No Fastforwarding Or Rewinding Out Of This

And No Subtitles To Help Me Through This

I Wish There Was A Way To Skip This Chapter

But My Scratches Are Too Deep To Function

I Am Rejected By All The Players

So I Just Sit In My Dark Caseing On Display

Waiting For You To Throw Me Away


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Copyright 2011 Antigeist
Published on Monday, October 24, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

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  • dwells On Monday, October 24, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Excellent simile I believe is the term? Thanks, and how true.

  • namelessmadi On Monday, October 24, 2011, namelessmadi (34)By person wrote:

    I loved this! Great write.

  • Devilish On Monday, October 24, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Hey there you... You can sit in my dark casing and I will NEVER throw you away... You eva need anything i gotchu... Scholar

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Monday, October 24, 2011, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    Amazing references. I like this work.

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