One Ordinary Prison Night

By Blood Saga



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"What do you miss most?" asked the first prisoner.


"Everything worth missing," replied the second. "Friends, family, hot tea and good books."


He'd scratched poems onto the wall of their cell with a dull pencil, as they weren't allowed to have anything truly sharp.
The opposite wall was taken up by a makeshift calendar.
One door, one window, all barred.
Dark strips of shadow stretched across the moonlit floor.


"There are stars back home," the first prisoner suddenly declared. "None of this light pollution shit. I miss stars, don't you?"


"Stars, yes...I forgot about stars."





































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Copyright 2011 Blood Saga
Published on Tuesday, August 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Fiction" and
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  • A former member wrote: Brilliant.

  • Devilish On Tuesday, August 23, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I miss stars, don't you? "Stars yes... I forgot about stars." It was if I was sitting there, leaned back in a hard chair looking up at the ceiling breathing those exact words... I promice I know how that felt... Scholar

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