since you've left
By The Lioness Rampant
I truely feel no void since you've left
I feel nothing for you
I have been freed from your unending bitter
hateful world
you've said things but they don't affect me anymore
you've messaged me but i refuse to reply
you called and I
let it go to voicemail
you never got the hint that I dont need you
I was never happy you tried to change me
I hated your music
the bass hurt my chest and you didnt care
my ears would hurt but you
just laughed
I could feel all the sadness
as I stand out in
the rain storm with all the lightning and thunder
I am washed
clean of everything
good bye forever sadness
good bye for feeling
hate for myself
good bye forever more
-love or hate me
always-
me
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Copyright 2011 The Lioness Rampant
Published on Sunday, July 3, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
this was written for all the things ever said to me in the past by ex's they are all dead to me and i will forever live without tradgedy or lovelessness because i will always stand on my own two feet and rely only on family for supportComments on "since you've left"
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, Nameless Pariah
(126) wrote:
Yes, you don't need anyone bringing you down or making life harder than it already is. And if they don't like you for who you are then to hell with them! Nice work.
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, The Lioness Rampant
(40) wrote:
ty i am trying to write things that are past events and how i truely feel ive been used by every guy for either money sex or supporting them by babysitting thier asses by holding thier hand through every little step right now im done with dating until im out of school i just dont need it right now
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, pureevil8
(48) wrote:
This is just brilliant. Standing strong on your own without fear, I wish more could be like that.
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, The Lioness Rampant
(40) wrote:
im learning slowly to be myself and not let others change me but im getting ready for nursing school and then im going to put my best efforts at the childrens hospitol
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On Sunday, July 3, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Yes... I "love" to hear someone say they aint caught up by another anylonger... Nice!
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, The Lioness Rampant
(40) wrote:
i wouldnt say its one of my best but im attempting a new angle but ty i really do love that you have commented so much
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A former member wrote:
you said it! this poem was amazing, i really felt the emotion you put into it. pure ingenuity!
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, The Lioness Rampant
(40) wrote:
thank you i have tried to put into words before but they just didnt fit