...Evanescence...

By Beautiful Incidental

Steady decadence leaves a lingering aroma that clings -
I can retreat to the backdrop and breathe it in - let it diffuse the lungs -
Enter the bloodstream... 

Of course I remember - the salty sweetness that marked your skin -
The lines of muscle traced - fingertips - ice blue eyes - no disguise -  
The ever-present urgency...

 How you enchanted me.  

Memories are brand marks - like the tattoo you insisted I portray -
Your irrevocable justification proves we've become the same -
Infinitely...

 But I lack the tangible evidence of your existence -
Or am I to be the proof - your evolutionary plan -
We were a beautiful incidental...

 Fascinatingly flawed... 

Evanescent. 

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Copyright 2010 Beautiful Incidental
Published on Saturday, July 17, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very impressive and inspirational! Creavtive name. "We were a beautiful incidental... Fascinatingly flawed... Evanescent." Utterly my favored lines. Appreciated work!

  • Alchemist On Tuesday, September 20, 2011, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    I just came back to this site after a month away and poems like this make me want to stay awhile your writing is insightful and as beautiful as you are.

  • Beautiful Incidental On Wednesday, September 21, 2011, Beautiful Incidental (38)By person wrote:

    thank you, shawn. i'm smiling....

  • Riven Waker On Saturday, August 7, 2010, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    complex & elusive - layered with meaning - in fascinating verse - brilliant!..

  • A former member wrote: The terrible impact of life's best and worst, of love and pain, leave us imprinted, changed, to carry on as proof that such power existed, if but for a moment....and some, but only a few, can put that power into words, which carry the same weight....beautifully done.

  • Grim_Sorrow On Monday, July 19, 2010, Grim_Sorrow (74)By person wrote:

    And I'm impressed... quite a write love, keep at it. I'll keep reading.

  • A former member wrote: You write so well. Please do not stop, ever. Thank you for your appreciation and feel it reciprocated.

  • A former member wrote: Brilliantly done. Welcome to DP and please write on! :)

  • A former member wrote: I like that Last stanzas... I've Felt that way before ^^ Nice

  • sixsixnine On Saturday, July 17, 2010, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    Brilliant! I will be sure to check out more of your works!

  • Beautiful Incidental On Saturday, July 17, 2010, Beautiful Incidental (38)By person wrote:

    i am grateful for your comments, minerva, and your ability to see...

  • Eye of Minerva On Saturday, July 17, 2010, Eye of Minerva (308)By person wrote:

    and i am grateful as well....a fresh enlightenment you bring....**bows**

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