prick me

By Beautiful Incidental

routine interactions are shrouded now -
of ulterior motives i am aware - the desire for more implodes -
shockwaves of indecision i uphold.

i cannot force my inclinations to close -
your words are chastised - only i can explore the core -
i will enter your subtle addiction.

love massacred by the hands of fate for me -
of what remains - pure fascination - the mind's interrogation -
i'll play for a while - but just to feel my heart bleed.

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Published on Saturday, July 17, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "prick me"

On Wednesday, February 15, 2017, motherofnature (46) wrote:

Nicely done
On Wednesday, February 15, 2017, MR feathered fox (28) wrote:

Beautiful write I felt this to marrow Also I love your profile txt Loved it....
On Thursday, October 4, 2012, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

It is SO nice to read somebody's work who has a strong command of vocabulary, spelling and poetic style. This is a great piece - powerful and succinct, touching and thought-provoking.
On Monday, October 8, 2012, Beautiful Incidental (38) wrote:

thank you so much for noticing :)
A former member wrote: Again Fascinatingly Wielding! "I will enter your subtle addiction" "I will play for a while - but just to feel my heart bleed." Intense and Raw Impressive work!
A former member wrote: nice write. your grammar use is awesome. the lines just burst fourth and make you see the depth behind the poem.
On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343) wrote:

This..was mind blowing greatness..all of it..all the lines.."the mind's interrogation" you say..your heart to bleed..all a game ..where your getting hurt..but all a fascination...a painful choice..but when aware of the motives I imagine you're on for the ride..How far can one go? implodes?..would it be the knowledge of that around you that gets you off further.to explore..beyond the boundaries that are broken."shockwaves of indecision "..when I read the..it did just that for me..it sent a wave down my spine..it's routine..moving..chillingly revealing..great write..hope that's the real routine
On Tuesday, August 10, 2010, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Oh yes...this does it. I love words like this that tease the brain but also the heart. It crawls inside my skin...lovely!
On Monday, August 9, 2010, Sin (1135) wrote:

i really liked the word play and the ending line was divine and resonated with me. nicely done ~k
On Tuesday, August 10, 2010, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Sin!!!!!!!!! Miss you!
A former member wrote: Another lovely write. :)
A former member wrote: ...And all that Remains will always be an Abstract Fascination, a Mindless Obsession, I can relate ^^