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Rain
By musicalsuicide
This rain is hitting the roof
Every drop in beats with my heart
I can feel the pulse throb through me
Then I realize you are
not there
To sooth this aching want
and desire to feel you
So the rain continues on
and I watch it fall
And I am
utterly alone
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Copyright 2010 musicalsuicide
Published on Sunday, May 16, 2010.
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2010, Scarrzz
(238)
wrote:
Sometimes it's hard to tell where the rain stops and the tears start. The longing and emptiness flowed freely. Excellent write, Angel.
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On Sunday, July 11, 2010, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
Captured these feelings well. Had me imagining sitting at a bay window vacantly watching the world with only your loneliness to keep you company. Sadly written.
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On Wednesday, May 19, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
the rain created the perfect backdrop for such feelings of isolation, rain poetry is always a good read, well done.
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Bravo, I love rain poems... fine imagery, well done... check (sooth) write on
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On Monday, May 17, 2010, Morgoth
(36) wrote:
Awww, thats so lonely :( I feel for you though, the rain makes perfect imagery with the feeling of loneliness.. Its been raining here too so this poem came at a moment when I was ready for it... thank you
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A former member wrote:
short and powerful. thumbs up
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A former member wrote:
I love it!
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