Rain

By musicalsuicide

This rain is hitting the roof
Every drop in beats with my heart
I can feel the pulse throb through me

Then I realize you are not there
To sooth this aching want
and desire to feel you

So the rain continues on
and I watch it fall
And I am utterly alone

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Published on Sunday, May 16, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

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July 11th, 2010

Comments on "Rain"

On Tuesday, September 21, 2010, Scarrzz (235) wrote:

Sometimes it's hard to tell where the rain stops and the tears start. The longing and emptiness flowed freely. Excellent write, Angel.
On Sunday, July 11, 2010, Dilated View (582) wrote:

Captured these feelings well. Had me imagining sitting at a bay window vacantly watching the world with only your loneliness to keep you company. Sadly written.
On Wednesday, May 19, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860) wrote:

the rain created the perfect backdrop for such feelings of isolation, rain poetry is always a good read, well done.
On Tuesday, May 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806) wrote:

Bravo, I love rain poems... fine imagery, well done... check (sooth) write on
On Monday, May 17, 2010, Morgoth (36) wrote:

Awww, thats so lonely :( I feel for you though, the rain makes perfect imagery with the feeling of loneliness.. Its been raining here too so this poem came at a moment when I was ready for it... thank you
A former member wrote: short and powerful. thumbs up
A former member wrote: I love it!