Addiction Absolute

By Malcholm Dark

I love you, I need you
I have got to have you
My life surrounds you
My dreams become you
No others shall replace you.


Oh God, help me
I've the devil in me
Addiction absolute!


You have taken me 
And forsaken me
I can't forgive me
You have become me
No others shall have me.


May God spite you
Yes, the devil is you
Addiction absolute!


Luscious--smooth--snakes
Multi-colored demons
Unholy sweetness
I curse you
As I devour you.


Please save me
The devil's within me
I am so addicted!


The candy from hell...
My gummy worms!



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Copyright 2010 Malcholm Dark
Published on Tuesday, April 13, 2010.     Filed under: "Satire" and "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: the devil and god sharing gummy worms..yum!hey,that's mine!curse you!

  • A former member wrote: awesome! there are some wicked War Heads in my personal stash...always calling my name...

  • midnight_temptress On Tuesday, September 28, 2010, midnight_temptress (9)By person wrote:

    lol! cute!

  • A former member wrote: HAHA!!! Loved it... Gummy Worms!! DAMN YOU GUMMY WORMS!!!!!

  • A former member wrote: well...hmm..quite an interesting write u've got here...i enjoyed it

  • lupus tenebrae On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    Just when I thought I kicked the gummy worm habit, this poem made me want them so bad. I guess I'll see you in Gummy Worms Anonymous lol, great write Dark. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I can picture the rehab scene. So "so and so" describe the torment you were at whims with when you sold everything for a bag of gummy worms! This is a good poem. It's brutal yet humorously twisted. Scholar

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    sweet!...gummy bears are just one step away from jelly beans...don't go there.

  • A former member wrote: malcom you da man once again. but unfortunately i dont think they have gummy worm rehabs man so your gonna have to battle this addiction by yourself. totally sweet poem

  • A former member wrote: lol..addiction can be so bitter-sweet..or in this case, just sweet...quite the uh..tribute here!

  • Miztaken4beauty On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (177)By person wrote:

    Haha, Gummy worms. :D Cute.

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