Can't we just fuck or is that too overt?

By Vicious Pixie

I don't wanna be your Lady
When What I'm feeling is
un
lady
like

Don't give me that look
Raw
Naked
Adoration
beauty and love

I don't want love
not tonight

I shouldn't bitch
when I know
there are
bitches
dying to be me

but sometimes
my darling
my dear
my sweet
gentle
love

sometimes i just want it
a little rough

I wish I could crawl into your head
and stir your deep
and darker
desires
you're an evolved man, I know
But still, under it all
just a man

Lets not make love tonight
no, not tonight

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Published on Tuesday, March 9, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

companion to "eating my words to a symphony apocalyptica"

Awards

August 7th, 2011

Comments on "Can't we just fuck or is that too overt?"

On Monday, July 22, 2013, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Raw, honest..We're all animals and that's why it hurts so much trying to be "good" and "acting right" all the time..It's good to fuck the pain away when the feeling's right and hormones are going apeshit crazy.
On Thursday, January 17, 2013, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

Oh this is just too perfect.
On Friday, January 4, 2013, FearlessDragon (137) wrote:

Ahh! Skeet skeet skeet skeeeet! ... Excellent write!
A former member wrote: you said it sister.
A former member wrote: Yes. Just yes.
A former member wrote: Sexy Naughty Bitchy :P
On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Dilated View (582) wrote:

A good way to get the...juices flowing? Creatively of course. A sexy read without being over the top. Thanks for sharing.
On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806) wrote:

Dirty, nasty, sexy. I like this. Your flow was pretty good and for the most part a very well written piece. I am old school, I think every line should say something, even if is just one word. "un and like" dooesn't say it. Very good, write on.
On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, IAmNorge (38) wrote:

Wow, I actually really liked this one...I felt I understood it and could really relate and feel the true emotion, I actually thought more work like this should win awards and poem of the days more often, anyway...you have all my accolades=] ~Orion