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5ive
By ToxicLove
It’s been
5ive days
5ive hours
5ive minutes
5ive seconds
Since you left *again*
It feels like 5ive eternities
Where have they gone?
The days of breathing in your breath, how you made me shine
Getting lost in your eyes, being held in your embrace
tasting your lips, feeling your heart beat against mine
You laying next to me, side by side or face to face
Where have they gone?
It’s been
5ive days
5ive hours
5ive minutes
5ive seconds
It feels like 5ive eternities
Since we remembered our dreams
Relived our past
Reminisced the good memories and
Let go of the bad memories at last
We said goodbye to a lifetime of love
Marriage and family, and parted as friends
Knowing on October 5ive 2008 the life we built
Together Forever Ends.
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© 2008 fiestysexyme
Published on Friday, June 6, 2008.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "5ive"
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On Friday, June 6, 2008, Aleas
(169)
wrote:
There are some good genes in this family. I feel weird saying I "enjoyed it". Almost like Im reveling in someone elses misery. So I'll say. Well said and very clever!
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On Friday, June 6, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
Excellent write. I felt it.
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On Friday, June 6, 2008, Dark Wing
(51) wrote:
Once again you have done it, I like your work, posted you has a fav, you have a way with words that just seem to fall together. ~Crow
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