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Orchids.
By saturatedloneliness6
Step back into the dark
Confess your sins and begin a new life
Drink the wine - be the hero
Bend your legs behind the wire; exhale.
Thoughts creeping out of every crevice
Innocence, vanished, cruelty lives on
Beg for it to take you, give in
Rejection, again.
Inhale; pressure fills your body
Close your heavy eyes
Water seeps out, descends down and against the floor
Decaying from the inside out.
Save me!
Exasperation!
Annihilation!
Repulsion!
Decimation!
Execution!
Away – exhale - flittering off into the distance
Gone – inhale – you will be sanctioned
The calling – exhale – putrid and daunting
Sympathy – inhale – instigated.
Rebuild.
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© 2008 saturatedloneliness6
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On Thursday, June 5, 2008, ToxicLove
(39)
wrote:
if I did not know better my child I would presume that this was advice directed to me... very well written.. damn you are passionate when you write
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On Thursday, May 29, 2008, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
There's something intangible about this piece that I just find really compelling and somehow empowering, with that final word, but I can't seem to explain why/how. My failing, not yours, there. And this line - "Bend your legs behind the wire; exhale." - is fantastic.
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On Tuesday, May 6, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
a fall and violent crash, shake it off, get back up, nicely put in words -symph-
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On Saturday, May 3, 2008, verablue
(111) wrote:
stunning write....original and thought provoking.
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A former member wrote:
i agree with you, Amanda, it was very good. keep it up.
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On Saturday, May 3, 2008, saturatedloneliness6
(7) wrote:
I thought it was very good.
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On Saturday, May 3, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Drink the wine - be the hero .. That wa so wierd. but the write as a whole was if pisible, even wierder. I'll return to this and see in the light of day
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