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enough of your problems ive got enough of my own
By whisperer
delete me from your secret
pause in your scent divine
all you satan addict dark massianic throbbing
post descent decay
i am not this time
i dont remember me
im not the way i used to be
im not your answer
not your cancer
just your prudent thought decline
im a never has been thought i could cross the line
that i am bound in tune to verse
fucked in this universe
prone to fly the curse
i aint what i wanted
i cant remember me
am i the way you dreamnt of me
am i not jesus christ?
...
youre the one who likes me
did i meet your expectations
i know i warrant a replacement
tell me darling
was jesus there
when i let you all down did he predict my error
but then you descend to me
i hate this inside of me
i know you christ but im just not that fair
when my world comes undone
im not the only one
who feels my pain
oh god why are you looking down on me
keep them clear
as for me i want to care
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© 2008 whisperer
Published on Friday, April 11, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "enough of your problems ive got enough of my own"
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On Thursday, April 17, 2008, RubyXero
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wrote:
i agree with magic hatman on the ending...but overall very nice piece. i like the dark, word-combining pieces that you bring. 2nd stanza...loved it.
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On Friday, April 11, 2008, Sketso
(435) wrote:
Rather psalmish, in a sense.
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A former member wrote:
Nice to see you're alive.
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A former member wrote:
i like the intensity of this. it seems if u were to speak it would come out raw and powerful. like a song.i like how you use a lot of adjectives, very descriptive. it helps me to see better thru ur eyes. excellent.
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A former member wrote:
LOL.
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