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slaughtered ambitions
By GraveFlower
broken soul
shattered hope
bitter reality
.
with no way to cope
irritable pieces of my heart start to break
the instinct to end it for my sanity's sake
they triumphed when they saw my pain
and i noticed
life is clear in its simplest form
nobody sees your tears when your standing in the storm
scream
"i wear my scars like the rings on a pimp
i live life like the captain of a sinking ship
theres one thing that i can guarentee
im like a fucking razor,
i suggest you stay fair with me"
i think its time to take this captain to the gallows
i keep stearing into areas that are shallow
dannielle,,is just a 9 letter word
depression is the name of my cement feathered bird
i sent him out to fly
and watched as he hit the pavement
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© 2008 stapled_lips
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On Tuesday, October 30, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
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wrote:
wow... just wow
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A former member wrote:
for im waiting to become a member here ur work doesnt suck it sucks cuz i cant book mark it
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A former member wrote:
love it wish i could book mark this sucks
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A former member wrote:
'nobody sees your tears when your standing in the storm' this is awesome:)
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On Sunday, April 3, 2011, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
Full of pain. As life often times is
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful and tragic, an amazing write, I admire your style, powerful!
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On Thursday, February 21, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
incredibly beautiful. i loved the end. damn those cement feathers...i feel sometimes as if my wings are made of cement and it is i crashing toward the pavement. nice to know i'm not alone.
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2008, Trigger
(70) wrote:
Damn! I really like this one, a lot! Good write Dannielle, keep it up! -Trigger
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On Thursday, February 7, 2008, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
you always shatter me at the end. love this one, too.
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A former member wrote:
Your prose is as dark as your blade is sharp. Good work.
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On Thursday, February 7, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
woah! this was sharp as razor and deep as the gallows, a hightened sense of pain in this, but beauty shining thruough this art -symph-
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