Papas Song

By liquid_emotion



Consequences of my father
Fall on my shoulders
And call me higher
To a better understanding
Found in a song
The emotions of the first time
It was ever heard
Repeating forever after
And I taste the salt in the wind
And hear the voices in my head
As I am there and always have been
In this moment

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Wednesday, April 30, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I can relate raw emotion nice work

  • A former member wrote: Yes! Music does this to me on a daily basis. That's how i remember most things, is through music, whether lyrics remind me, or notes, or whatever, music can take me to beautiful, painful, and sometimes scary places. You painted it vividly. :)

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, May 5, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Beautiful notion! I can relate - with some songs, when I hear them I too can feel the same emotions, sense the same smells and sometimes the same inane thought runs through my mind. Good one! Ciao, T/S PS-my, what beautiful eyes you have! Scholar

  • Jonas On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    music, calls to the air a taste of hourglass sand years... sometimes unlocks a part of your soul.

  • liquid_emotion On Thursday, May 1, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    exactly;) you always know my thoughts... my intensions with words.

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Wow. Very touching. Leaves me wondering. Excellent poem Miss Liquid.

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