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oscillating like the northern atlantic winds
By totaltrip
smoke fading up to the sky
ashes consumed down to the ground
always an outward smiling disposition
a constant inward sullen adversity
an unwaivering devotion to him
a full awareness of the solitude
hope lost somewhere along that lull
between what dreams are made of right before drifting off to sleep
and the reality of it when awake
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© 2008 totaltrip
Published on Friday, January 18, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, April 21, 2008, Mari
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wrote:
i like your writing/
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On Friday, January 18, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(178) wrote:
Vivid imagery with a well developed sense of longing.
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On Friday, January 18, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
familiar images and all too familiar feel... elegantly expressed... it was painful but done with a softer edge... well done
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A former member wrote:
the contrasting ideas and imagery work really well. especially lines 3 & 4.
nice work!
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