Between the lines (she lost you)

By Tania

Dreaming.
Where are you now?
(now when she needs you)
Self reflecting.
Her head swims in memories
But her heart it drowns in loneliness..
Imagining.
What it used to be like to be loved..
Like the torn and faded pages
She’s simply thrown to the floor..

Lighting up a cigarette..
..only to watch it burnÂ…
Waiting.
She’s always waiting..
Though she’s never quite sure
What it is she’s waiting for..

Â…De ja vue Â…
(she’s been here so many times before)

Trying to find the love she lost..
Trying to find you.
She lost you somewhere..
She’s just not sure where..
Reading.
So hard in-between the lines
She finally lost herself..
And If I cant find her..
..Nobody can...

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Published on Thursday, March 22, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Between the lines (she lost you)"

On Monday, March 31, 2008, Reefer_rave (139) wrote:

mmm reflective of so much..
On Sunday, November 11, 2007, totaltrip (36) wrote:

nice. nice. so nice.
A former member wrote: love the cigarette imagery. .. burning, waiting, semi.patiently....hoping. . .. neeeding. . .its all there. . .great write
On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Moonflower (298) wrote:

that was wonderfully amazing! really like this one.
On Sunday, April 15, 2007, jack paper (121) wrote:

this brings back so many feelings, so many memories, such a sense of lonliness and longing... good write
A former member wrote: wow, this is so deep. Yhe title and the poem completely took me by suprise. I loved this piece. It has to be your best yet. Simply a msterpiece. ][ ][
On Thursday, April 5, 2007, Armor for your life (9) wrote:

I'm just blown away this was perfect.
On Monday, April 2, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Now this is perfect in every which way. You are such a beauty inside and out.
On Monday, April 2, 2007, Disassembly Boy (59) wrote:

Absolutely beautiful. I'm sorry I haven't commented this yet! grr. I've been soo busy. I loved every word, as usual. :)
On Monday, April 2, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

'as usual' haha ;)
On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

i cannot beleive i forgot to comment. first i love how you take your time to write something palatable, not just verbal spew. your works are always deep and thoughtfull and provoke emotion dirceted towards and understanding, not ambiguity. lots-o-love :)
On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

Thank you too c ;)
On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, disc (36) wrote:

This is a beautiful way of expressing how it feels to be lost. I really enjoyed this.
On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

Thank you.. :)
A former member wrote: brilliant as always. ~ saddened.
On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

Yay!! for jon :) and thank you everyone else of course :)
A former member wrote: This was so great that it gave me chills. Well done
A former member wrote: "Her head swims in memories/But her heart it drowns in loneliness.." Goodness gracious...I've lost myself in such lonely, longing tones the last week. Maybe when you find her, you'll find me as well. Gorgeous. ~*Beth*~
On Thursday, March 22, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (93) wrote:

Beautiful dear...loved the ending...I hope you find her.I`m glad you posted i wanted to read more of your work.~Elana
On Thursday, March 22, 2007, prettydisgrace (93) wrote:

..de ja vue.. ive been here too. wonderfully portrayed,i know its hard.stay beautiful:)
On Thursday, March 22, 2007, Dark Nymph (24) wrote:

I just recently went through something like this so I can similarly relate. Nicely done m'dear
A former member wrote: wow...this blew me away. Amazing!
A former member wrote: Beautifully written. I can relate to this is so many ways.