Comments by disc
- "The one thing I've noticed with all of your writes (so far), is that there's a definite consistency throughout them. Your poems have a tempo that rings out in my head. Keep doing it."
Posted by disc on "no apologies" by swing_the_hammer
- "This made me think of someone tearing fingernails through a fresh oil painting. Well done."
Posted by disc on "Monochrome Moods" by Tania
- "The big word that stands out here is "wow." I enjoyed your beautiful alliteration and the image you burned in my mind. I also love how you wrote of "yin and yang," good idea to intertwine this into your work. Wonderful!"
Posted by disc on "And he smiled" by Alacer_Cogitatus
- "very sorrowful as these others have said. the last line made for a brutally painful ending. wonderful write."
Posted by disc on "Heartbreak" by Alacer_Cogitatus
- "You have a very fantastic way of snowballing your writes. It starts strong, tones down a bit, and then continually builds up to an explosion. The last line leaves you without breath."
Posted by disc on "rain- [a painted cascade]" by Six-Out
- "I really like what you did with this one. I really didn't see the ending coming at all. Unpredictable=very strong writer. And that you are. Good write right here."
Posted by disc on "I am your dreams:" by Six-Out
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