Hark, I Hear A Thought

By liquid_emotion

I sit in a perfect silence
Still hearing the tree frogs
A chirping of half cricket, half bird
I sit in a smothered darkness
Cut by a deep sparkling sky
Beauty of pureness undisturbed
And as I sit I ponder him
Never far from my thoughts
Or dwelled upon for hours
And as I sit I start to listen
To a heart that stutters questions
When what I seek are answers

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Wednesday, April 23, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • DoctorAsh On Friday, April 25, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    beautiful again, yes. such artistry

  • shadowsinthelight On Friday, April 25, 2003, shadowsinthelight (146)By person wrote:

    Must be nice, here there are no tree frogs, just barking dogs. The question must be asked before there can be an answer. Very nice, S

  • Jonas On Thursday, April 24, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    when you're on the border of peace and yearning... on the yearning side, waiting, but still steadily breathing, anticipating your chance to relocate. as long as your papers check out...

  • KittyStryker On Thursday, April 24, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    mmmm... yes... hearts are complicated critters, eh?

  • cre On Thursday, April 24, 2003, cre (410)By person wrote:

    Concise and beautiful. The last three lines are just so dead on and convey a feeling incredibly well. Great job.

  • FallenSky On Thursday, April 24, 2003, FallenSky (42)By person wrote:

    such a sweet blend of words, it paints a beautifully vivid image in my mind and then ends with a thought ... keep writing ~CFS

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