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Years Later
By liquid_emotion
dreams
of perfect clarity
wake me
and torchure me
lingering
for days sometimes
grabbing me
at inopportune
moments
when the world is
quiet
making my throat
ache
and my teeth
clench
and my body
shake
while the dreams
replay
in my mind
again
and again
and again
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Thursday, February 20, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
i know this feeling much too well. I repress most of my past but it sneaks up on you as flashbacks, I hate it, hope you aren't having them anymore
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On Thursday, April 24, 2003, Stranger
(264)
wrote:
I read this out loud several times. It reads beautifully and stirs up so many memories and feelings.
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A former member wrote:
cant believe i never commented on this one. you have a way of getting at things that i think about 9 or 20 times a day. I hate bad memories, but, that's probably why they stay.
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On Friday, February 21, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
You captured a lot of feeling with very few words in this piece - this is one of my favourites from you.
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On Thursday, February 20, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
A tangible poem about the intangible,beautiful, i love it when you get intellectual.u.h.
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On Thursday, February 20, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
Laughing..catching breathe... Is that a come on u.h.? :)
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On Thursday, February 20, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
i love this. i'll be (anywhere) and then the memory or the feeling of something not quite entirely containable in my head will jump out of the depths of my sub-head :-) and bite me on the brain stem. chills.
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