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Rage
By Angst Queen
Chop,chop, there goes his cock
Then I rip out his eyes
Blood flows from his body
Soiling the ground
I laugh at him as he lies there
Screaming for his death
I'll continue to torture him
He'll regret killing her soul
He'll regret...
Regret it all
Chain him down
Hack off his arms with a dull blade
Dismantle him piece by piece
And laugh as he cries
Laugh as he dies
And laugh at the pile of body parts on the ground
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ok, i have no idea how to classify this, so its under other. i was just
a little on the ticked off side when i wrote it
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Copyright 2004 BloodRoseWolf
Published on Saturday, January 31, 2004.
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On Tuesday, April 4, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564)
wrote:
Wow you've blown me away.*Grinz* I'd hate to be male and piss you off girlie
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A former member wrote:
well i dont think i'm ever going to try and make u mad. even though i dont have a cock, im sure u could find something else importent of mine to chop off
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On Friday, March 4, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
....oh my
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A former member wrote:
.....if you and I ever cross paths, and something is said that you don't readily agree with.... I'm hoping maybe we could sit down over a cup of tea or something, and uhhh..... talk it out.. ;)
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
That was hardcore horror show stuff. I like it. ~b
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, island warrior
(210) wrote:
This is full on.
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A former member wrote:
This work is beautiful if you know how to see into it.You are an amazing writer I've read most of your work, you are truely gifted with words, I beliave we could all learn something from your work. Don't cut us off now, keep the genuis coming!-Deathwriter
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A former member wrote:
Rage is good. This poem reminds me of my own DP screen name. Thanx. ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
Awesome expression of your anger!!! Gotta love it!!! Rock on...
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
LMAO.~ss
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
Chop chop there goes his cock..oh wow, that line was priceless. Vengence has it's place in art, and it life. One of the 25 satanic statements expressed it very well. nice one *~seraph~*
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A former member wrote:
ooh violence. I like this one, makes me feel like I should be taking revenge on certain people. good write ~serpentine~
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A former member wrote:
Instills fear-love it.*DDP
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A former member wrote:
this made me cringe. nice work._-=Evil=--
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On Saturday, January 31, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...and you said some of my methods would suck...this is pure pain at its worst from the start...btw, put your older works up, or ask Matt if he still has them... -Darun
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