Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucination….
By Zhee
Dark and hungry, the specters
Abandon dominions of the dead,
Emerging from the anarchic core
Seek refuge inside the head.
Rancid voices viciously excise
The amputated sense of verity,
Morphed visions rip and ravage
The wasted pleas for charity.
Fears breech gilded barricades,
Slivered sanity falters behind,
Mangled hands futilely scratch out
Glass shards from the bleeding mind.
Traversing into realms of insanity
Dreams lament their demise,
Now the rampant nightmares
Just stab the open eyes…
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Friday, October 1, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
the 3rd stanzas probably gonna stay etched on my mind for a long time, amazing write
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A former member wrote:
The specters you talk about remind me of homeless people, whom you see every day. 'The glass shards' of sanity remind me of seeing grafitti on walls,
written in blood. ~Shane~
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On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
your work is impressive and makes me think i should hide in a dark hole for my lack of talent heh. i really love this, espeacially the last line
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A former member wrote:
i love the last line. and the title... boy do i know nights like that... good job
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
The last verse, particularly "Now the rampant nightmares Just stab the open eyes" such a perfect description, damn. this just kicked my ass.. great work here.
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A former member wrote:
amazing, Zhee. im left almost speechless.. as usual, fabulous work
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
so.. just marvelous. I cant help but love reading your works. you are a true artist with words.
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Zhee,you never cease to amaze me...marvelous simply marvelous ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
I have come to the conclusion that you should never let any of your patients read your poetry they'd probably go more crazy...I did enjoy the poem though
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
i absolutely agree.. my patients should never ever see this and those who do should never be my patients ;)
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
ooooooo i love it...love that is....::scuttles off to add to faves::
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
3rd stanza was killer,cool write