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Ambition led me here...
By Methos
Coldness comes into this world of mine
shattered dreams and sands of time
reflections of a past so long ago
flood the waters that once were low
beautiful sounds fill my ears
bringing with them warming tears
The cold draft of life whips into my soul
with so much and so little left to go
i look for shelter; i look for safety
from this cold that envelopes me
finding only the footprints i left behind
with memories of warmer times
Further and further; forward i stride
with nothing left but anguished pride
it's then i fall to my weathered knees
victim of the bitter cold breeze
surely this is where it ends
so far, from where i began
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Copyright 2003 Methos
Published on Monday, November 17, 2003.
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On Saturday, February 28, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405)
wrote:
Im speechless, lovely poem.
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
what can i say.****
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A former member wrote:
Hmm...I never commented on this. There are some excellent lines in this. They drip with...wistfulness? Thinking of how things have turned out? and I love the ending.
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On Monday, January 5, 2004, spaniellie
(76) wrote:
wow, you have a incredible way of bringing you message to people... well done, great write
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A former member wrote:
Makes me feel all cold inside..*shudders* o.O
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On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
I love the way your words flow like a melody to some forgotten tune, truely beautiful..........O.
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A former member wrote:
All of your writing is beautiful. I really look up to you and consider you a true artist.
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On Tuesday, December 16, 2003, unusual_blood
(74) wrote:
wow. i too am speechless. this .. this poem is swarming with amazing lines and powerful emotions, this is a really reallY REALLY good poem .. i must go and stick it up on my wall ..
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On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
wow nothing left but anguished pride.....great line I know that kind of pride personally....indeed...good job
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
.....speechless....I'll come back when I think of something to say...~Delilah~
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, asailorsangel
(34) wrote:
You reach out and pull your reader in, a style that envokes your reader to looker deeper within themselves..a sign of pen in touch with much more than the world in view...
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, asailorsangel
(34) wrote:
(correction) to look
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On Monday, November 17, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
"it's then i fall to my weathered knees victim of the bitter cold breeze surely this is where it ends so far, from where i began".....beautiful ~Drea~
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