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Wildfire
By Crystal Passion
An ache
Burns inside with fierce determination
to explode within if not satisfied
sweat
trickles along delicious curves
decorating sleek satin skin exposed to hungry eyes
tender hands
trace their way in heated anticipation
of pleasure yet discovered on hard... trembling... bodies
exotic lips
tentatively exploring shapes and contours
tasting the bittersweetness of hidden treasures locked inside a cave of
innocence
Lust
is a touch set to flame
In case of wildfire
Stop...
Drop...
And......
let the flames engulf you
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Copyright 2003 Crystal Passion
Published on Tuesday, October 28, 2003.
Filed under:
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On Monday, December 1, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me
(171)
wrote:
This is a very good write, i did not expect the end at all, but it was wonderful, good job ~Emptyness~
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On Thursday, October 30, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
excellent kryz, i love how you ended it especially, ever so dark, yet held inner beauty and lust, awesome
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
WOWWWWIEEE!!!! Very Nice!!!! I couldn't even imagine it any better...I never new such passion could be so well put into words. I miss burning like that thanks for reminding me ..Nice write crystal, Keep it up Bloth Andii
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A former member wrote:
*watches with hungry eyes* Yummy!
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A former member wrote:
Oooh I should have waited until I got home to read this, now I'm at work and can't use it to my advantage:p Nicely written, once again. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, anathema
(50) wrote:
mm. well written. should put it in the contest under lust...
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
**hugs kitty tightly**
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A former member wrote:
Very nice, good description of all of our nymphomaniacal or satyriacal thoughts. Very good work. (-Lotus-)
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On Friday, October 31, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
hehe you amuse me j-rod
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...hehe...sure...anytime... -Darun
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A former member wrote:
kryz u never fail to please me with ur poems
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