Blood of Winter

By A Velvet Tongue

Blood of winter
stains the white
casting off
the frigid fright

moonlight splays
across the sheets
anartica's breath
the only heat

raindrops held
within the air
letting us know
winter's here

His blood thick
rich...sanguinary
into his mind
I long to tarry

Cool the boiling
the cauldrons hearth
blanketing all
a soft rebirth

one as he
melds with his title
sweet rarity
within to idle

into his veins
the darkness seeps
in arms of desire
I soundly sleep

each new year
the seasons grant
something new
to enchant

A dreamers orb
open wide
blood of winter
softly slides

crimson tears
coat his cheek
ever more
his soul to seek


let me hibernate
in snow dusted hills..
with blood of winter
freshly spilled...



{Dedicated to the special darkling, who few can match}
Blood of Winter...

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Copyright 2003 Beverly L. Hernandez
Published on Monday, October 27, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    WOW this is amazing!~ss

  • aXe FactoR On Monday, June 28, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    a wonderful tribute to a wonderful person. dan sure deserves such words of beauty. this piece is rad & beautifully written. -MeL-

  • Drea On Friday, October 31, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    ...no words would be good enough vel.... just know i was here and it blew me way. ~Drea

  • A former member wrote: blood of winter softly slides, a soft rebirth stains the white, crimson tears freshly spilled, each new year raindrops held; into his veins, I soundly sleep.

  • A former member wrote: "anartica's breath the only heat" there r many great lines in this poem, yet this is one of the most unique & original i've read in a long time. the oppossitions, like seasons and lovers, such an enigmatic thirst w/ the tongue u have.

  • Demosthenes On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    only words are (word is)... exactly. -B

  • maddin foxxxy On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    You have convinced me over and over that you are a true poet...you can never fail in making a good write...and so this is another remarkable to my eyes.

  • A former member wrote: well said, mXXXy, and I very much agree with you... Vel has delicate & sensual beauty in her poetry...

  • Blood of Winter On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    M'Lady, I don't know what to say...I am not deserving of such eloquent words, you have melted my heart...I shall remember these words forever as the greatest compliment anyone has ever given to me, and yet again I am captivated by your elegance

  • A former member wrote: I loved the imagery, you made it dance in my imagination. Wonderful job. ~LoKi~

  • Silent_Raven On Monday, October 27, 2003, Silent_Raven (19)By person wrote:

    this is such a beautiful poem as usual with you, beautiful imagery...*RAVEN.*

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