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Young love it was
By darkendomme
Young love it was...
on grounds bed of
​crunching leaves. My love
​I lay beside...beautiful mounds
​hidden beneath the sun's
soon harvested sheaves.
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Young love it was....
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gentle snow falling between
naked kisses, caught in
​eyelashes that smile.
My hands recalling how smooth
​and fragile you felt.
Discovering love and it's making
on Decembers soft furs of pelt.
Young love it was...
These dimming eyes lovingly remembers.
Awaiting my turn, alone I now lay.
Each season a memory, of you I replay.
Watching and waiting as the returning
Spring melts the cold ice away....
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Copyright 2017 darkendomme
Author's Note:
I saw an old man resting in the shade, he had a sadness about him and the poet took over.....creating a sad story of lost love..Comments on "Young love it was"
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On Sunday, July 2, 2017, worm
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wrote:
moving, touching and lyrical in it's expression... a wonderful write! ~worm~
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On Thursday, June 29, 2017, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Almost seemed like an elegy from the grave DD. You did well to capture something innate to almost all of we - the lucky ones. Cheers lady! - Dan
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On Thursday, June 29, 2017, Just Dave
(457) wrote:
Great write. Very visual. "gentle snow falling between naked kisses, caught in ​eyelashes that smile." Brilliant line. Thank you for sharing this. JD
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On Thursday, June 29, 2017, Jerry stiles
(251) wrote:
Great write sir,,made me think of my lost loves,,thank you,,my heart is working,,woooo yeahhh,,
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On Thursday, June 29, 2017, Devil lyn
(368) wrote:
Random people have such a way of bringing about some of the best poetry; this was one of them. Beautiful inking,:)
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On Thursday, June 29, 2017, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
The sadness radiates like the cold autumn winds. Well done .
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