constellations touch

By King_Crazy_Dave

Your cosmic hips shift, comet lips
split and spread
Lust in space dust all tongue stirred and hand fed,
Your skin alight meteorite-like
as in, your body rocks.

I'd like to learn your goddess-gravity action
to reach for your skies and feel a touch of the attraction
A pull
of star skin bright and moons full

My fingers all wrapped in taut twilight hair
Yanking the horizon til your sunset-eyes solar flare

In space, they say,  a scream cant travel
but I can hear our solar system moan as it unravels
and on our nights, stargazers turn blushing voyeuristic,
We're fogging up their telescopes
and turning on the mystics.

Celestial body breathtaking,
Mythic,
Shaping stories, sparking big-bang verse-
It's just little dipper me
connecting dots in the you-niverse

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Copyright 2013 King_Crazy_Dave
Published on Friday, October 18, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

goddesses starring gods
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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, January 13, 2018, carlosjackal (2471)By person wrote:

    Witty, clever and an absolute delight to read. Mega worthy POTD.

  • Cassette On Wednesday, December 6, 2017, Cassette (1251)By person wrote:

    I always did envy the words on your tongue.

  • Cassette On Sunday, January 14, 2018, Cassette (1251)By person wrote:

    Congrats on PotD. It’s well deserved

  • Dei On Sunday, July 5, 2015, Dei (706)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • Melankolia On Thursday, February 27, 2014, Melankolia (70)By person wrote:

    I tip my hat to you, sir. Very well done, indeed. I especially appreciate your use of metaphor and allusion.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Friday, January 10, 2014, Dreaming in Stanzas (332)By person wrote:

    Sexy without being overt, it's just so perfect I can't wrap my mind around it.

  • infinitebeing On Thursday, December 12, 2013, infinitebeing (95)By person wrote:

    WHAT A LOVELY WRITE :)

  • A former member wrote: I truly love getting lost in this. badass. everyone else said what I would like to but, I'm not so eloquent with words, awesome work!

  • ubiquitoussoul On Wednesday, November 6, 2013, ubiquitoussoul (413)By person wrote:

    brilliant. this is my favorite of the parodies... it feels like looking up at a glow in the dark ceiling and stealing a dream from the planets posters..im stoned but I could say this rides like a midnight jaguar ,,,online dating haven't tried it? maybe goes well as this poem does as grape on the jelly toast.. or buttery roast! sweeeeeet,,

  • SpookSchrijver On Monday, November 4, 2013, SpookSchrijver (6)By person wrote:

    Very nice! i love this

  • soul_versing On Saturday, October 26, 2013, soul_versing (1224)By person wrote:

    Tastefully sexy, Dave. I love it. Bows- Scholar

  • Star On Tuesday, October 22, 2013, Star (1296)By person wrote:

    I have nothing to say but amazingly beautiful.

  • Maladroit On Saturday, October 19, 2013, Maladroit (299)By person wrote:

    I feel so stoned. Inducive work.

  • A former member wrote: i love the closing lines in particular, that final thrust. steamy and intergalactic orgasmic phantastic, pressing that threshold of love, time, space, travel. no dimension can keep or refuse you, bro. you tear through barriers like they're plastic wrap all like WHAT BITCH. kinda like the dude in slaughter-house five but you're in control. das my bro-mo' fa sho, yo.

  • A former member wrote: basically, you're the kool-aid man of poetry.

  • the Id On Friday, October 18, 2013, the Id (33)By person wrote:

    Nicely done, yo! talk about some cosmic epic lust! She's gonna love this.

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