Alice and TheHatter (The real story)

By xZombie Poptartzx

There's this unforgettable boy.
who shall remain un-named.
He's a master of manipulation,
and used to play love as a game.

He'd roam from town to town,
using his unique form of combat.
Stealing hopeless,poor girls hearts,
just to keep them in his top hat.

With nothing but his warm blue stare
and the soft wickedness heard in his voice.
He'd lure them in just to break their hearts,
convincing them in the end, it was their choice.

Until one day he met a girl,
Who was lost in his twisted world.
Innocent and beautiful, he began to fall,
until his lies one by one unfurled.

See, this girl saw through the malevolence,
looking deep into those hypnotizing eyes.
Just a poor lost boy so insecure and alone,
using his lid full of hearts as a disguise.

She one by one, emptied that thing,
replacing their hearts with her own.
Not realizing she'd never get it back,
because her heart would later be sewn.

Years went by, as did the lies
but she tried her best to keep it together.
For a promise meant more to this girl,
than some stupid top hats feather.

In the end she chose to leave him alone,
hoping one day he'd learn to be better.
After several years of trying to move on,
they both learned the true meaning of forever.

Heartache grew to sleepless nights,
no other companions could seem to compare.
Both lovers grew restless, and his heart cold.
nothing left but regrets and despair.

Now i'd love to change this piece of non fiction,
just to give it that perfect fairytale ending.
but i've learned in life that some relationships,
are far too gone past the point of mending.

The reality is...
They've chosen to stay far apart.
yet they both hold on to a keepsake,
Yes, they still have one anothers hearts.

So if you meet this young man,
and you find yourself begin to fall flat.
Just remember he hasn't forgotten her...
and you might want to check under his hat.



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Copyright 2012 xZombie Poptartzx
Published on Monday, December 31, 2012.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

We'l always be the other half. Alice and hatter i know you like that pair...but in reality...It's Jackie and Jenny.
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  • A former member wrote: Jesus! This is seriously hauntingly familiar, at some point it felt like you were writing a chapter of my life... In reverse perspective. The one that got away, but in so many ways never really left. Circumstance just seemed to bitch slap me hard that day. With this beautifully tragic write you've really taken me back to some both wonderful and devastating memories. It's difficult to get out the words to describe how this poem made me feel. Suffice to say it is deeply moving. You've stricken me speechless.

  • A former member wrote: wow, this is so touching, so much the very image of love I've always had. I'm so taken aback by your poem, every twist and turn is redolent of love and grace.

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Friday, June 21, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    Awe thank you :)

  • Alchemist On Monday, June 10, 2013, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    The last two stanzas are so bitterly sweet and poignant. A poem as beautiful as the poet herself.

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Thursday, June 13, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    Awe. thank you

  • A former member wrote: such a tragic love story with great flow it, was awesome to read

  • haunted On Friday, January 4, 2013, haunted (849)By person wrote:

    oh my god zombie this poem bangs like a stick of dynamite! the flow in this are flawless your ryhming is perfect and the story line is constant. and i also am proud of you for maturely expressing how you feel without being cruel and bitter. thats how things stay in middle ground. this just kicks ass! awesome job!

  • Melancholic VIncent On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, Melancholic VIncent (429)By person wrote:

    Love is the ultimate prize. But for those that play with it, it's a wild beast that tear you apart. You'll find someone who is meant to love you all the way :)

  • Ortolan On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    I once said that to destroy love is like severing a limb in that it doesn't grow back.Someone told me love can't really be destroyed.Whatever it is, I still don't know if it's better to be alive and spiritually dismembered or not.

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    The way I feel is that everyone has a "Soulmate" and they dont always end up with them, nor do they always even meet them, but when they do you should hold on forever....and in extreme cases where you have to just let go...keep them close still. maybe they were meant to be a friend. Love is the only thing in life that has ever made me feel alive,and even though my heart was broken by who i truly believe to be y soulmate (over and over again) I wont give up on love.

  • A former member wrote: In Greek mythology, I read of a story were everyone had 2 heads, 4 arms, and 4 legs. The gods eventually split them in half, leaving them with what we are now. We are all trying to find our other half.

  • Melancholic VIncent On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, Melancholic VIncent (429)By person wrote:

    Love is the greatest thing in life, you are right :) And i'm glad you won't give up in finding the one who will make you happy until the end :)

  • Devilish On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Much love baby girl. Beautiful people aren't meant to have soul mates. So we shall all suffer the love. a cold coasting simmer.. hugs. Scholar

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    *hugs* thanks babe. I think im just meant to suffer... there's no real explanation lol

  • A former member wrote: Very well written

  • PoetessDarkly On Monday, December 31, 2012, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    awesome pen

  • A former member wrote: wow, beautifully written ^^ very heartfelt

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Monday, December 31, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    There's just that one person you're meant to be with...and we were lucky enough to find one another. and as much as we may wish those feelings would go away...they never will. thats a love far greater than any other either of us will ever experience again sadly

  • A former member wrote: Although I hate this is what it is,... that was a lovely write..

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Monday, December 31, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    Hate that it's what? ....

  • A former member wrote: Come to that,

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Monday, December 31, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    *nods* Trust me.... I know.

  • Star On Monday, December 31, 2012, Star (919)By person wrote:

    utterly beautiful poem!! 10 (:

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