is it over

By whisperer

day to day things seem to come and fade away thoughts intact and on a binge yet from this point the sky is thin
reaching up to grab the rain drops i close my eyes and then my heart stops thunder brings to bear whats behind my eyes and this is the point where i wish i could die but im thinking and drinking breaking teeth in a grin and ill never really know until im done in so hear the voices remember the names or be strapped like me to the front of the falling airplane

do we seem to enjoy it, its all i can do to avoid it pour some more just to help me destroy it while the tears and disease falling at my knees are feeding the trees would you let me swing free please?
oh what i would do to enoy this pleasant day
take a look at yourself then wash it away
desperation curbed pride reeled in and all i remember thinking is "when will it end"

we've all got our choices but how many voices does it take to convince or are they just noises
sucking you in
breaking your hold
god forbid i close my eyes and let subconcious take hold

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© 2007 whisperer
Published on Friday, September 21, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ebonyamore On Friday, April 24, 2009, ebonyamore (101)By person wrote:

    always your words....make such a deep impression on me. sometimes they hold me too tight at it hurts. sometimes they stroke me just the right way and its beyond pleasure. sometimes the deep impression is made by how carefully they unwrap themselves around me. write on, surgeon of words.

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