Comments by Elise
- "Ouch, short and to the point. Blinded by love and lead into darkness."
Posted by Elise on "My Angel" by Eladrim
- "Nice flow, that was well written ^_^ The last line seemed the strongest, a great way to end it."
Posted by Elise on "Who I Am" by Eladrim
- "I love the comparison between you and the rope, such perfect meaning. Great write."
Posted by Elise on "You" by Eladrim
- "Thats very heartbrokenly written. The last lines powerful, full of meaning. I like this a lot."
Posted by Elise on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
- "This has a nice flow..I would like to think that some good will come of this."
Posted by Elise on "Fate" by Eladrim
- "For someone new at this, you'd never know by reading your works. Someone has hurt you to the point where they can't get in anymore, powerful."
Posted by Elise on "Ice" by Eladrim
