Comments by DarkWolf

  • "Lovely. Romantic, sad and beautiful. Nike is right, the last two lines are deeply seductive. Love this work. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Breathe" by Syn
  • "Again such beauty and sorrow in your words. Lines 4 & 5 really stand out to me. I just love the things you write! -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Cloak of Death" by Syn
  • "This seems full of longing.. great imagery. Wonderful work. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Torn" by Syn
  • "This is SO Morbidly Romantic!! The last two stanzas are enrapturing! god this one is so beautiful. Another favorite of mine. Thank you for this one. Great song also :) -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "In Love And Death" by Syn
  • "I love poems of this type. I am a cutter turned cutter-for-pleasure, so it is a subject I like a lot. Beautifully sorrowful, and the second line gives me ideas. ;) The last line is ominous and very cool. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Razor Blade Dreams" by Syn
  • ""to be revealed within your deepest syns within." I love the idea and I love the way you use your name in your works. Simple, but very cool. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "to be (eternity within you)" by Syn
  • ""Dreaming blood red thoughts of you..." "...I may lose my life And have a kinky damned time..." "How about we make a pact? We kill each other on first contact?" This one is SO erotic to us... I may have to write that third one above our bed. Thank you s"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Somewhat Obscure" by Syn
  • "God, I love your works!! That first stanza is so remorseful in its questioning. You are an inspiration. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Life or Death?" by Syn
  • "ahh, blood.. this is an event we would love to attend... delicious, frantic feeling from this one.. hysteria meets blood lust and empty death. Very cool. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Bleedfest 2004" by Syn
  • ""I try to ease the day I've given up on seizing the day" My sentiments exactly. Wonderful. Thank you. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Carpe Diem? No." by Syn
  • "Lovely, erotic in its imagery (maybe thats just me) "renew me in you" I can relate to that line so well. Thank you for this one. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Desparation On a Kiss" by Syn
  • "The last line is the one that really gets me, "please remember this broken girl tonight". Haunting"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Dark Poetry Error" by Syn
  • "This one is so short, yet makes me so sad. I feel as if I have lost someone, and I don't even know you. Thank you for sharing your works with us. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "Dark Poetry Error" by Syn
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