Dark Poetry Error

By Syn

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Please refer all comments to the depths below.
Her soul departed with just one blow.
The shot rang out but was not heard,
The only thing said, was a single word.
She spoke of "love" and so she died.
Please remember this broken girl tonight.

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Published on Monday, August 2, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Dark Poetry Error"

A former member wrote: This is really good and powerful. I really like it because with so few lines, it manages to bring out emotion. Bang up job, really ^^
On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Serenity (469) wrote:

This makes me want to cry.
On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Mahakala (207) wrote:

memories bring tears to my eyes...
On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, jestronlyrests (5) wrote:

This is a really cool (and initially confusing) perspective on "what if" someone in your life were all of a sudden gone or dead. Take nothing for granted!
A former member wrote: Wow..... That's amazing. I feel like a friend just died...
On Monday, August 23, 2004, mysticventures (527) wrote:

Incredible Grand Finale - how bout an encore?
On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey (79) wrote:

Thats so deep and darkly beautiful, I feel like I have lost you and it makes me terribly sad...PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!!! Keep it dark I love it that way. -Munkey-
A former member wrote: wow, that is really deep.
On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, DarkWolf (415) wrote:

This one is so short, yet makes me so sad. I feel as if I have lost someone, and I don't even know you. Thank you for sharing your works with us. -Michael
On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, DarkWolf (415) wrote:

The last line is the one that really gets me, "please remember this broken girl tonight". Haunting
On Monday, August 2, 2004, Lifeless (38) wrote:

Wicked cool. I really ejoyed reading this.
A former member wrote: I will remember the only way I have known you, thru your works. It has been wonderful to know you.
On Monday, August 2, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

awww, this was awesome, wordless, as tim said kya
On Monday, August 2, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

impacting to say the least
On Monday, August 2, 2004, Blood of Winter (296) wrote:

amazing...
On Monday, August 2, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

A pity, as I found this to appease me plenty, and in the most devious of ways. Time, place and person excluded ...