to be (eternity within you)

By Syn

to be embraced secure
within your mind of pure
intentions

to be revealed within
your deepest syns
within

to be lost but found
on your glory bound
conceptions

to be kissed of sweet
desired feats
of your true
infliction

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Saturday, August 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • NikesRain On Friday, August 13, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    so much put into this. It's just awesome. Great

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, August 7, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    "to be revealed within your deepest syns within." I love the idea and I love the way you use your name in your works. Simple, but very cool. -Michael

  • Crystal Passion On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    oh wow, I loved this piece, very nice delivery, thank you for sharing

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